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Re: Out of this World
Hey, IamArt! This is a fun song! It kind of reminds me of the kind that Taylor Swift would sing, actually. If that's not a compliment for you, then I ...
Oct 27, 2009 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
Okay, here's one: I can't talk on the phone on my left ear. It has to be my right. Otherwise I can't hear half the things the people are saying, ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Burn the Flame
I've never been much of a song writer, but these lines came to my head the other day. I figured I should write them down. Tell me what you think. ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Just Like
I don't know much about writing songs, but I do rather like your imagery. I like songs that put pictures in my head. I also agree-- Just fall into a ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: The Elements: Secrets of the River (Prologue)
Helloo! First of all, I've just got to say that you've got a captivating voice, especially as the story flows on. Your descriptions are well written, I think, although I ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: A Harry Potter Parody
I have always considered myself to be a die hard Harry Potter fan. But now? I'm a die hard Henry Putter fan. This was amazing! I love the way you ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Of Fair Fortune--A Harry Potter Fanfic. Chapter three
Thanks to all those who commented! You're absolutely right, all of you, and I'll get down to it! Until then, here's then next bit. I'm planning on writing more, but ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Of Fair Fortune--A Harry Potter Fanfic. Chapter two
Chapter Two The drive was uncomfortable, to say the least. The kids had wanted to make the outing as Muggle-like as possible, which meant the adults couldn’t apparate to wherever ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Of Fair Fortune--A Harry Potter Fanfic
Chapter One Hermione arrived at the Burrow for the summer to find the house virtually empty. It was strangely quiet in the Weasley home, and it was beginning to make ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 10
Holy crum! She just up and killed the guy! What was she thinking? Now people will consider her a threat! :shock: Anyway. That was pretty dang intense, I have to ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 9
Hello again, Well done again! I'm feeling kind of stupid because I want to write a good review but I have nothing to critique you on. I can compliment you, ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 29
Hey, KJ! After I read both of your new chapters, there was only one thought going through my head: "Ahhhh!" Thanks. Now I have to read it again so I ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Black Hole
Thank you! Your honesty is very refreshing, not to mention helpful. I'll get on it! --Anna
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Black Hole
I think you're absolutely right! Some change in direction would do this some good. Please, tell me your ideas. What do you think if I started with "Flying harmonies fill ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Black Hole
It's been a while since I've written a poem. Please don't judge me by this work alone. It's a bit...raw. I'd love you to tear it up. Tell me what ...
Jul 5, 2009
